Comments on: Mila, 17

By: Peties_Pam

Peties_Pam — Wed, 20 May 2009 14:02:22 +0000

I too found myself wanting to curl up around my puter like I do with a good book. Can’t wait to read what happens next Jane!

By: Frank Paynter

Frank Paynter — Mon, 16 Mar 2009 00:43:31 +0000

Impressive. I enjoyed reading it.

By: perksofbeingme

perksofbeingme — Tue, 10 Mar 2009 23:47:54 +0000

Wow. This is truly amazing. I have no words to explain how awesome it is, just the silent tears that it pulled from my eyes, and the tug on my heart.

By: Undomestic Diva

Undomestic Diva — Mon, 09 Mar 2009 21:03:34 +0000

Your writing is phenomenal.

By: Sam (from Caribou)

Sam (from Caribou) — Mon, 09 Mar 2009 18:59:06 +0000

I like it a lot. Like I was saying, I may not be your target audience specifically, but I can tell you that this has just enough angst and anger without exaggerating the emotions. Very appealing to what you’re going for.

And the hook? Great image, very powerful. I dig it, I dig it.

By: Beth

Beth — Sun, 08 Mar 2009 13:23:27 +0000

This was such amazing writing! I didn’t want it to end. I even found myself trying to curl up around my laptop much in the way I curl around a good book.

Excellent!